Watching the sun at midnight
This is another take, or perspective, on the poem I posted recently, "Midnight Sun"Watching the Sun at MidnightWe crowd on deck with drinks,and watch the strange, anarchic sky.The colonel puts his...
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///proper verse, that ... yes, yes!!poetry with no need of introduction,interpretation or spin-doctoring ...just right off the cricket-bat andstraight between the eyes.Davie ... this is dynamite.the...
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Oh Neil - you are a tonic! Thank you so much for a most generous comment - glad you liked the last two lines!Davie
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Davie...you do things with words that Fred Astaire never could do with dance!Elegant.Eloquent.Whistles of pure admiration from the peanut gallery!
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I can't help thinking it's the Colonel's wife who has the great marine beasts irritated...Silliness aside, this is an enjoyable read.
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I suppose it wouldn't only be the marine beasts that were irritated. It would be so strange to have 24 hrs of sunlight, but I guess you'd get used to it.Suzanne
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Many thanks Gala, Michael and Suzanne for your comments!Davie
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This exerts a strange and powerful fascination...so much going on just behind the lines on the page...and so much that can be drawn from each strand of imagery...a remarkable piece of...
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Davie I love the feel of this of relaxing having a drink as nature rolls on by, superb!!
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